supernatural fanfiction

1. Disney

Dean and Castiel were gays watching Disney porn cartoons at motel. While they tried to do the love-making, Sam and Gabriel walked in and interrupted  them and teased them.

It’s a witty and interesting story which is easy to read and follow. Modern humour was implanted in the characters, it was something different. The dialogues has been well used to create  cheerful, cosy and playful scenes. The story line has been well established with good detail guiding the audience but lack of thrill tension and it is not convincing. 

2. The New God

Castiel wants to be the New God, convincing himself he is superior than others. He is willing to kill anyone who contradicts  him. He is also egotistical and the world would be better when he is the New God despite the fact he is no different than others.                                                   

The story has been well written with good detail illustrating the internal conflict of character. Repetitive language is used to convince the audience, eg. I am a new god, I am a better god.  It’s a story with good imagination catching the audience’s attention from the first line. It’s a thought – provoking story, making readers think what went through the character’s mind.

3.Birthday Troubles

It was a birthday surprise present for Dean although it was four days late.  Watching the Space Shuttle launch! After a cosy, warming pancake breakfast , John, Dean and Sam  went to see the Space Shuttle launch which turned out to be a disaster as the Space Shuttle exploded  while launching.

The writer used the baby language "I hepped", "Space sip", "fwying" to create a light, cheerful astomphere storyline but also composed the mood swing to the tragedy at the end . It was a provoking story which the writer used the Space Shuttle explosion at ending to express that life can't be predicted even if we try to have a normal family day out. The story line captured audience’s attention and encouraged them to read on. It was well told with good description and  imagination which I enjoyed reading . 

4.The price of love

After a day’s hunting with Sam’s mistaking “Bear” as “Dog”, Dean and Sam went to the bar. Dean had left his mobile phone at the Motel and when he turned back, a powerful speeding car tried to kill him.  Sam went to save him without thinking he might get killed.

 It was a  well paced and easy to follow story with detailed description. The writer used the dialogues to express the characters’ emotions.  It was well written with a good storyline, stimulating for the audience to read .

5.Fear

The year’s contract is due.  Dean is afraid he would leave Sam alone despite Sam still trying  to find a loophole in the contract to save his life. He is struggling with his fear as his life nears the end.

This story expressed Dean’s fear and emotions that went through his mind as his life nears the end  .  It symbolized  the character’s internal conflict with repetition of  “ I am scared Sam.", " Really scared." It’s a well paced and well described story. It was a vivid emotional description with perfect structure which would grab audiences'  emotions. I enjoyed reading it.